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2012年12月英语六级作文真题(I):保持信任

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题目:On maintaining trust 保持信任

字数:150满分:100分

用户的作文(系统评分79.0分
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拼写做的很棒,在平时练习中注意词汇量的积累;作者句法知识很棒,适当增加从句的使用,会取得更不错的成绩;文章上下文衔接不是很紧凑,结构缺少组织。

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It is believed that trust is a crucial quality in our life.It can help us establish excellent friendship,and it can increase much proficient to our work.On maintaining trust plays an important role in our life. There are some reasons following the attitude.First of all,trust is such an important quality that everyone cannot give it up.It can help us build powerful confidence to face difficulties or solve many problems.Second,on maintaining trust is the crucial of starting business successfully.Without it,any companies can develop smoothly,even breaking down.Trust is the greatest agreement if we want to establish or develop a business with other company.Last,without trust,the world will become unease for everyone all want to define others to improve their proficients,so that the world will increase many armies,collision,death and so on,that will be very horrible. In a word,maintaining trust is the essential of building a beautiful and peaceful world.

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