2012年12月英语六级作文真题(II):人与电脑

句法知识不错，多多加强复杂句的练习；文章用了较为丰富的词汇，学术词汇略显单薄，同时注意单词拼写的检查；连接词过少，建议增加衔接词汇的积累；连词使用偏少。

Nowdays,computer spread everwhere,we need them everytime It's important for people to work,study and so on. computer is a electronic sensor that can give so much information to us.Recently more and more computer occupation everywhere. In shool teacher use computer for teach.In company ,people reckon date ,serch information through computer. what's more,it can chat with friend or others wherever we stay ,it also listen music ,looking movie . computer and men can not apart ,it become our especily thing in life.