2012年12月英语六级作文真题(I):保持信任

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on maintaining trust with the development of society, many people don not trust other people any more. they think every one is think themselves first and wound make bad things for them. however, trusting is very important for us in our society. in the first place, trusting other people can acquaint many helps when we are in trubles. in the second place, trust other people we can do any thing successfully half of time.