小学一年级英语作文:Good friend

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My friend's name is HuangWen.She is a very quiet girl.Now,she study on Huangshi school.She with me together grow up,we all the some ago on school.Althoug we all stay other part,we still call on.Our friendship cound'd bread up with time.I belive our friendship will foreve .Even if we all grow old,we will still together as now.