2011年12月英语四级作文真题:坚强的意志

作者句法知识很棒，适当增加从句的使用，会取得更不错的成绩；作者词汇表达较丰富准确，不过学术词汇的积累还有很大的空间；上下文衔接稍显不流畅；请注意分段。

Strong will is an important guarantte to succeed.Only the one with strong will can he go through hard times and make a step to get to his goal.In other words, people with strong will can accomplish the great mission.Such as, the correspondent in old times.He had to fight against the bad environment and self-tired, with his strong will,so he could bring the latest news to his king.Similarly to students,if they don't work hard,they couldn't be a helpful person to society.Yu Hongming ,for instant, he with his strong will and diligence established New Oriental.