2012年12月英语六级作文真题(II):人与电脑

可适当增加复杂句和从句的使用；文章结构不够严谨，应增加过程性词汇的使用；作者词汇使用较为丰富熟练，单词拼写方面要更仔细。

With the develpment of the technology, computer becoming more and more essential on daily life for everyone. Computer is useful. However,some harm is appearrence. On the one hand,it is efficiency and coveninent to do work or study of using computer.We can easily get the information form the Internet on computer. And computer reduce the distance between the people and people on earth.We can see erveybody all of the world and just need sit in a stool. On the other hand, when we enjoy the computer,the more and more questions is coming. For example,we can get everything we want to buy by computer, so people become lazy and have many illness of using the computer. We get close on the Internet,but,we spend too much time on computer so that we can't have the conversation in the daily life. On the modern society,people and computer get close is inevitable outcome,however we also need to take care the usual daily life.