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2013年考研英语作文预测话题:沟通的意义

发布时间:2013-08-23 17:28浏览次数:13013
要求:

题目要求:

围绕沟通的意义写一篇小文章。简明阐述自己的观点。

字数要求:

200字以内

用户的作文(系统评分71.5分
评语:

文中词汇表达比较多样,能多用学术词汇就更好了;作者句法不错,但是文章整体句子稍微偏短;行文稍显不流畅,应增加文中衔接词的使用;请提高文章内敛性,段落和句子要围绕主题展开。

用户练习作文:

One important way for us to acquire knowledge is reading, especially reading classic. Some people think that classic represents the wisdom of the past, but how are we considering it. Firstly, we should know what is classic. So many people do not know classic. The classic is a book or other thing that record the wisdom of the ancients. Why should we preserve classic? The first reason is that our intelligence which was came from our ancient, and we cannot forget the roots. All classic have a very high value. The second read classic may improve our wisdom and so on. As far as I am concerned, we need to classic carried forward.

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