Source: Bureau of Labor Statistics, Current Population Survey.
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From the above graph,we can observe that education pays become more and more important ,people in higher earning more than other in lower .The Doctoral degree the less Unemployment ,but it earn the most than others. With the rapid development of society ,people need to study a large number of knowledge to change our life . More and more knowledge need our studying .so education already became more and more important for us. The all society should pay attention to the education pays . As far as i am concerned .On the one hand ,a large number of knowledge need to learn,so the people who have higher degree more popular for society .they earn more thing of valuable .On the other hand,plenty of person do not pay more attention to education pays.therefore ,the education importance should be strengthened ,while we as college students should teacher others pay more attention to education importance.