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2008年12月英语六级作文真题:提高心理健康

发布时间:2013-05-18 00:33浏览次数:1951
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题目 How to improve student's mental health
要求
1.学生心理健康的重要性
2.学校应该怎样做
3.学生自己应该怎样做
字数:150满分:100分
用户的作文(系统评分80.5分
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学术词汇需要继续积累,单词拼写不错;能够很好的使用长难句且句法很棒;上下文衔接稍显不流畅。

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In our modern society,people always stress the importance of physical health.It's ture that only when our body is in good shape can we do well in other things,but this is not enough.As a real healthy man,you should be not only phisical but also mental health.Without our mental health,our lives,families and even society will go into a mess and our physical health will become totally pointless. Now that spiritual world is such an essential part for people,what should school side do to guide students?It's no doubt that the first step is to spread the related imformation in school to awaken pupils awareness of the importance of spirit.In the meantime,teacher is supposed to have the ability to find the problems students have and have a talk with them before something bad happen. On the other side,students themselves are the key role to improve their mental health.As a student,when we confront any spiritual problems that we can't deal with,we'd better to ask our parents or teachers for help rather than just thinking alone.Besides that,we ought to read more classic books,which will benefit to improve our health and build a true mental world.

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