注意下文中出现的句法错误;文章词汇使用丰富度还要提高,学术词汇的积累上也要再接再厉;文章采用了适当的过渡词和衔接词,结构比较严谨。
The Impact of the Internet on Interpersonal Communication With the development of society ,everyone almost has own the computer at home, however,the face to face communicate of peolpe more and more less,what causes them that? Different people hold different answer,some one think that with the economy development , and more and more people become rich, and then, they have own want to the things, for instant computer.they can used it communication with them friends and families.on the contrary, other person said that people too lazy to face to face communication with others. In my opinion,I agree with both of them, because we can do lot of things on the internet ,so we wouldn't meeting anyone go out.
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