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2012年6月英语六级作文真题:人际沟通

发布时间:2013-05-18 10:50浏览次数:4565[网页划词已开启]
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题目 The Impact of the Internet on Interpersonal Communication
要求
1.For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a composition.
2.the topic is "The Impact of the Internet on Interpersonal Communication"
3.You should write at least 150 words but no more than 200 words.
字数:150满分:100分
用户的作文(系统评分61.5分
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注意下文中出现的句法错误;文章词汇使用丰富度还要提高,学术词汇的积累上也要再接再厉;文章采用了适当的过渡词和衔接词,结构比较严谨。

用户练习作文:

The Impact of the Internet on Interpersonal Communication With the development of society ,everyone almost has own the computer at home, however,the face to face communicate of peolpe more and more less,what causes them that? Different people hold different answer,some one think that with the economy development , and more and more people become rich, and then, they have own want to the things, for instant computer.they can used it communication with them friends and families.on the contrary, other person said that people too lazy to face to face communication with others. In my opinion,I agree with both of them, because we can do lot of things on the internet ,so we wouldn't meeting anyone go out.

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