托福Toefl作文模拟题附范文 第52篇:草率的判断是否可信

作者有一定功底，可在平时练习中增加长难句的记忆；文章采用了适当的过渡词和衔接词，结构比较严谨；作者能较丰富地使用学术词汇，但词汇量不大，且存在拼写错误。

I agree with the statement that snap judgments can never be trusted with two reasons which includes snap judgments would influence the accurate judgments from the public, besides, snap judgments would bring bad side-effect to the society. The specific explanations are as follows. Firstly, snap judgments would confuse the accurate judgments and bend the real explanation from the initial fact. We can see from a similar experience as well as a word game, for example. According to the regulation of the game, in a group of people, one person should say the sentance to another person, then one by one. At last, we can find out that the initial meaning of the sentance has been totally changed. It is just a game spreading the sentence, not to mention the influence of snap judgments. Secondly, with the impact of no scientific judgments and methods to the study or different industries, the results may stunt the society. Moreover, when the students learn that professionals trust the snap jedgements, it is hardly to envision the outcomes and the future path of the country. Therefore, as I illustrated before, there are no advantages for the pulic to trust snap judgments which may hinder the process of civilization. Snap judgments can never be trusted.