题目:On maintaining trust 保持信任
字数:150满分:100分
作者词汇表达丰富度要继续提升,学术词汇使用过少;作者句法知识很棒,适当增加从句的使用,会取得更不错的成绩;上下文衔接不流畅,文章结构不严谨。
On maintaining trust It is well known to all of us, people keep touch with others need to be honest, everyone should trust each other, so that people can become real friend. As we all know, trust is the basic acquirement in our life and it is very important in our daily life. We always be told to be a honest man, only you are honest, people can trust you. If you are a businessman, you should be honest to your customers, so that your customers can always trust your goods. What is more? I think people should maintain trust. There is no doubt that there are many lying in our daily life. People become more and more carefully when they meet a stronger. Actually, maintaining trust will help us know outside.