托福Toefl作文模拟题附范文 第52篇:草率的判断是否可信

采用了适当的衔接手法，层次清晰；文中应增加从句和复合句的使用；学术词汇使用较丰富，拼写做的很棒。

I agree with the statement that snap judgments can never be trusted with two reasons which includes snap judgments would influence the accurate judgments from the public, besides, snap judgments would bring bad side-effect to the society. The specific explanations are as follows. Firstly, snap judgments would confuse the accurate judgments and warp the real explanation from the initial fact. We can see from a similar experience as well as a word game, for example. According to the regulation of the game, in a group of people, one person should say the sentence to another person, then one by one. At last, we can find out that the initial meaning of the sentence has been totally changed. It is just a game spreading the sentence, not to mention the influence of snap judgments. Secondly, with the impact by no scientific judgments and methods to the study or different industries, the results may stunt the society. Moreover, when the students learn that professionals trust the snap jedgements, it is hardly to envision the outcomes and the future path of the country. Therefore, as I illustrated before, there are no advantages for the public to trust snap judgments which may hinder the process of civilization. Snap judgments can never be trusted.