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托福Toefl作文模拟题附范文 第52篇:草率的判断是否可信

发布时间:2013-08-19 17:06浏览次数:17572
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作文题目:

Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? 

Snap judgments can never be trusted.

Use reasons and examples to support your opinion.

草率的判断不可信。你同意这种说法吗?给出原因和例子。

字数要求:300字以内。

用户的作文(系统评分83.5分
评语:

采用了适当的衔接手法,层次清晰;文中应增加从句和复合句的使用;文章学术词汇使用熟练,词汇表达较为丰富。

用户练习作文:

I agree with the statement that snap judgments can never be trusted with two reasons which includes snap judgments would influence the rigorous judgments from the public, besides, snap judgments would bring dreadful side-effect to the society. The specific explanations are as follows. Firstly, snap judgments would confuse the accurate judgments and warp the real explanation from the initial fact. We can see from a similar experience as well as a word game, for example. According to the regulation of the game, in a group of people, one person should say the sentence to another person, then one by one. At last, we can find out that the initial meaning of the sentence has been totally changed. It is just a game passing on the concept of the sentence, not to mention the influence of snap judgments. Secondly, with the impact by no scientific judgments and methods to the study or different industries, the results may stunt the society. Moreover, when the students learn that professionals trust the snap judgements, it is hardly to envision the outcomes and the future path of the country. Therefore, as I illustrated before, there are no advantages for the public to trust snap judgments which may hinder the process of civilization. Snap judgments can never be trusted.

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