题目:On maintaining trust 保持信任
字数:150满分:100分
过渡词很丰富,衔接词同时使用的恰到好处;作者有一定功底,可在平时练习中增加长难句的记忆;作者词汇基础扎实,注意文中极个别的拼写错误。
With the rapid development and wide spread of high technology, some people take advantage of the human beings' kindness to gain the profits, for instance, deceiving you win the reward via the Internet or cellphone,frauding your family you encounter an accident. Believe or not,it's always falsable.Above all,the trust has been eliminated by time. It's the trust that is one of the most traditional virtue,which is necessary equipment of everyone.To begin with,we should be on maintaining trust to each other first.The trust is the bridge of communication to others.If you do ,others would treat you the same as you.Besides,when you make a decision,you should think over wether you have such capacity, otherwise you'll lose others' trust.What's more, you must keep your promise as good as possible.In these ways,you will receive others' trust ,as well maintain trust between people and people. In conclusion, it is difficult for everybody to always keep your mind and further to retain trust,however,once you come over it,your interpersonal communication would have a colorful future.