2011年12月英语四级作文真题:坚强的意志

文章学术词汇使用熟练，词汇表达较为丰富；文中应增加一些长难句的使用，会为文章添彩；上下文衔接不流畅，文章结构不严谨。

today，lots of people are lack with strong wills and this will be the terrible problem in the future.their is nothing to say that nothing succeeds without a strong will. from the first,a good strong will is the guarantee of achieving success .we all believe that a person can't do anything well who don't have a strong will.from the second,only a person who have a strong will can finish the great mission. as a student,we also need strong wills and if we don't study hard,we will not get success forever. in conclusion, the strong will is play a important role in our life,we should find it's benefit and create our awareness of getting strong wills.if we can do this . we should approach success quickly .