2011年12月英语四级作文真题:坚强的意志

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today，lots of people are lack with strong wills and this will be the terrible problem in the future.they are nothing to say that nothing succeeds without a strong will. from the first,a good strong will is the guarantee of achieving success .we all believe that a person can't do anything well who don't have a strong will.from the second,only a person who have a strong will can finish the great mission. as a student,we also need strong wills and if we don't study hard,we will not get success forever. in conclusion, the strong will is play an important role in our life,we should find it's benefit and create our awareness of getting strong wills.if we can do this . we should approach success quickly .