2012年12月英语四级作文真题:Education pays

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It is show that the report we can know with the booming of the economy,the education pays has improved and lower unemployment in these years.Why has lead to the phenomenoy? We should how to see them? At the first of all, It is all well-know that the knowledge is energy .in paritculary ,the development is more faster century We have to need use the knowledge to add our see and lisening .As my personly advice is ture ,more degree can proved you is a want to become better, but we must know more degree can't represation your hand ability . When we gratuate from my degree ,find a job to improve is a important way From this view ,I think the degree although is an disenable things, at this time we should improve our hand ability ,should more sense develop .