2011年12月英语四级作文真题:坚强的意志

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With the development of social,we are face with many stress that include economy and responsibility.so it demands us have a strong will. First and foremost,nothing succeeds without a strong will.It obviously that many successor already through many difficulties and lose before success.what s more,most of the great man in history are having a strong will so as to they can accomplish missions.so do I,in addition ,we are flowers in the country as college students ,we should hard work and close to success.we all know every victory is not lack of a strong will. To conclusion,we should expand our vision and improve abilities ,then we are facing with many lose when we walk to succcess,we will have a strong will in that time.