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拼写方面做得很棒，平时练习中注意词汇量的积累；作者句法不错，但是文章整体句子稍微偏短；文章结构不够严谨，应增加过程性词汇的使用。
Make you money useful Whether collecting all kinds of coupons is a right way has fired a heated debate . Some think it's quite absolutely right while some think it's a kind of waste . From where I stand , I think it's smarter not to use coupons . The reasons are as follow . First , we may spend money on unnecessary things . With a coupon on hand , we are more likely to consume without hesitation . We buy a lot of things out of our need due to it seems cheap . We should avoid fall into this trap . Second , we develop a habit out for small advantages . Some small advantages are enticing . On consuming aspect , we may just lost some money avoidable , but in another aspects , to some serious extent , we even commit crime because of on the fiddle . In a conclusion , resisting the will of out for small advantages is crucial . Coupon owns its advantages in some certain conditions . However , to be a rational consumer , we should keep in mind making your money useful . It's not just a consumer value but a habit we should carve in our heart .
