Source: Bureau of Labor Statistics, Current Population Survey.
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According to the survey,we can know about the relationship of the unemployment rate、median weekly earnings and the education level in 2011.Nowadays,most people of the education level is High school diploma or some college or associate degree from the left chart and we will have more salary with our education level rising.