四川2011年英语考试写作表达

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Today,my father's birthday!In the moring,I got up early to prepare a gift to my father .Then,I went to a store buying a tie with a nice heart.I picked a red tie which looked awesome.When I paid for it,I went home.I took a subway going home.There were so many people.Fourtunatly,I had a seat.When I took the seat,I thought of my father expression after I sent it to him.So I had a simle.After some time,a old man got on the subway train.Seeing this situation,I put my seat to her.After that ,she said thanks to me.When I got off the subway,she said goodbye with smileing.Arriving my home,my father was fong of my gift.By the way,I told him about what happend to me this morning.He gave me a big hug.Anyway,happy biethday to my favourite father!