行为稍欠流畅,过渡词用的还可以;把握下长难句在文中的分布;作者能较灵活地使用词汇,学术词汇使用较恰当,但存在一些拼写错误。
Nowadays,many people study international language of english all around the world. However, a lot of students only pay attention to listening and looking on Learning English words, so that they ignore is an important part of spelling. Have a several reasons for this. In the first place, many students think them only need to speaking and listening on study english, thus they can communicate with foreigners. Secondly, they think them only need to know meaning when meet this word. So they not carefully remenber english words. Finally, most of schools neglect spelling of students. To change this condition, I thik the teacher should let students speilling words every day.