文中词汇表达比较多样,能多用学术词汇就更好了;建议适当增加些复杂句的使用;过程性词汇偏少。
Nowadays,many people study international language of english all around the world. However, a lot of students only pay attention to listening and looking on Learning English words, so that they ignore the spelling is an important part of it. Have a several reasons for this. In the first place, many students think them only need to speak and listen on the study english, thus they can communicate with foreigners. Secondly, they think them only need to know meaning when meet this word. So they are not carefully to remember words. Finally, most of the schools ignore students' spelling. In order to change this situation, I think the teacher should let students spell words every day.