2012年12月英语六级作文真题(II):人与电脑

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Nowadays many people like using computers ,because they are helpful and easy to control .it can help you find what you need and you do not need to paid for it .so people uaually use computers to work,study and buy things.if you buy things in the internet,you do not need go out.someone will send you.looks like a kind of door-to-door service.so that people become more and more lazy.they do not think,because computer can deal most problems. I think it is dangerous.people do not talk to each other face-to-face.they can talk by onternet ,like QQ,weibo.Humen being must think about it.Or people will lose communicting skills as a disable.thinking more talking more.