2012年12月英语四级作文真题:Education pays

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As is vividly in the picture, the higher education diploma we have, the low unemployment rate will be.Generally speaking, if you have high education degree, you will get more money weekly. Education pays in higher earnings and lower unemployment rates. On the one hand, many companies want to choose some people who has higher degree. They always think the higher education means better ability. On the other hand, the higher education can enrich our knowledge and broaden our horizons. If we accept higher education, the company may be attracted by our learning. As an old saying goes," it is never too old to learn". We should learn more to enrich ourselves.