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2011年高考英语卷写作表达题目范文汇总(90):交通事故

发布时间:2013-12-19 17:38浏览次数:594
要求:
在我国, 随着越来越多的人拥有车辆,交通事故经常发生在我们身边。你班就这个话题展开了讨论。请你根据下面的提示,写一篇短文。
1. 事故原因:违反交通法规,超速驾驶、酒后驾车等。
2. 事故后果:财产损失、人员伤亡等
3. 措施或建议:加强教育、增强安全意识等

注意:

词数:110左右。请勿逐条翻译。

参考词汇:

交通法规traffic laws and regulations:安全意识 awareness of safety

赔偿compensation.
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In China, more and more people own their cars and traffic accidents happen frequently, which has a bad effect on the whole society. In view of the existing situation, we held a heated discussion on it. We all share the opinion that the cause of accidents is mainly due to careless drivers who don’t follow the traffic laws and regulations. Could you imagine what will happen for a heavy drinker if he drives his car at a high speed? The injuries and possible deaths will give him an unforgettable lesson, let alone the compensation to be paid. It is obvious to us that crowded roads lead to traffic accidents as well. In conclusion, we suggest that people should make sense of traffic law and regulations and strengthen their awareness of safety.

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