2012年12月英语六级作文真题(II):人与电脑

拼写很棒，可适当增加学术词汇的使用；文中应增加一些长难句的使用，会为文章添彩；层次不清晰，几乎没有使用衔接词。

Computer and Man Computer has already become an important part in our life.But if computer can advance to people?Of course not.Because without human,without computer. It is no doubt that computer is helpful to our life.No matter study,or work.Especially in recent years,a majority filed couldn't leave off computer.Such as some large number calculate,it is hardly to calculate by person,it only can with the help of computer. As an individual,our ability is limited and many time we should deal with the problem with the help of computer.But we shouldn't enlarge the computer function,a lot of things just can solved by man.Computer just a tools,all problem depend on it is harmful and make you more and more lazy, didn't consider by yourself. In short ,computer make our life more convenience, but what we need to do is not depend on it.In opposition,we should make good use of it by a right way.