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2012年12月英语六级作文真题(I):保持信任

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题目:On maintaining trust 保持信任

字数:150满分:100分

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拼写很棒,可适当增加学术词汇的使用;文中应适当增加从句和长难句的使用;上下文衔接稍显不流畅。

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Everyone lives in the world, must communicate with human beings. And of course,we need friends in our lives. How to consist a eternal friendship is a actual problem me confront with.As far as I am concerned, one of the most important methods is on maintaining trust. As you can see, friends is the motivation,but at the same time, friends can be the handicap too.Why does this happen?The main reason is trusting.A person will do many things when he or she alive, but they can hardly finish those things only by themselves usually,then a friend can do much help for you. Now you trust him can try his best and the things he has done are good for you.At the same time,he think you are his friend, you will help him when he face with problems. When you two do as the thinking, that means you trust each other,and you will be good friends.But if you think the failure is his,he just think you have no quality be a friend of him, the everything will be dangerous. So only you and your friends on maintaining trust, can your friendship can go far and forever.

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