2012年12月英语六级作文真题(II):人与电脑

作者句法知识很棒，适当增加从句的使用，会取得更不错的成绩；衔接成分太少，文章结构欠佳；作者平时练习中应扩充词汇量，注意几处拼写错误。

Nowadays ,most people have access to computer.Computer having been great influence on our lives.For many people,the advantages far outweigh the disadvantages . The great information resouce high speed and huge capacity are makes people depend on it ,and it was regard as "electronic brain "by human. Should we put all our sight on the advantages and ignoring the disadvantages? The answer clerely is "on“. computer can help people solve a lot of work and complex things ,however, long time with eyes on the scan let people far away their natureicat live and less communication with family,friends and other who care about you.In addition ,highly depend on computer makes people's writing ,remory function weaken .What's more, use computer frequently do haumful for human . In a word, we should use it decently.