题目:On maintaining trust 保持信任
字数:150满分:100分
有效地采用了多种衔接方法,层次清晰;文章在句法方面做的很棒,从句和复杂句的使用不错;文中词汇表达灵活多样,也能较丰富地使用学术词汇。
With the rapid development of high technology, some people take advantage of human beings' kindness to gain the profits, for instance, deceiving you win the reward via the Internet or cellphone,feuding you encounter an accident to your family. Believe or not,it's always false.Above all,the trust has been disapeared by time. It's the trust that is one of the most traditional virtue,which is necessarities of everyone.To begin with,we should be on maintaining trust to each other first.The trust is the bridge of communication to others.If you do,others would treat you the same as you.Besides,when you make a decision,you should think wether you have such capacity, otherwise you'll lose others' trust.What's more, you must keep your promise as good as possible.In these ways,you will receive others' trust,as well maintain trust . In conclusion, it is difficult for everybody to always keep your mind and further to retain trust,however,once you come over it,your interpersonal communication would have a colorful live.