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2001年1月英语六级作文真题:面试成功的因素

发布时间:2013-05-14 19:08浏览次数:2295
要求:

Directions:  For this part, you are allowed thirty minutes to write a composition on the topic How to Succeed in a Job Interview? You should write at least 120 words, and base your composition on the outline given in Chinese below: 

1. 面试在求职过程中的作用  

2. 取得面试成功的因素:仪表、举止谈吐、能力、专业知识、自信、实事求是……   

用户的作文(系统评分76.0分
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可适当增加从句和复杂句使用;文中学术词汇表达比较恰当,但单词拼写不够认真;文章结构不够严谨,应增加过程性词汇的使用。

用户练习作文:

Interview plays a significant role in finding a job.In most cases,only when the interviewees perform well can they get the job they want.Interview offers chances for the corporation to get a futher and real insight into the job-hunters'personalities,which is decisive for their final decision. Several factors lead to the success of interview.To begin with,the appreance and the manners the interviewees show.There is no doubt that the first imprssion is one of the most important factors until you become familiar with each other.What is also worth attention is the abilities you have.No one will be willing to miss you,if you are a versatile talent for the job.In addition,confidence can increase the incidence to success.Confidental interviewees turst themselves,endowing them with energy and courage to confront the difficulties and challenge. In a word,interview is a door to the opportunity,the only way for you to perform well is to update yourself with time and be confident to show your advantages.

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