2011年6月英语四级作文真题:网上购物

拼写做的很棒，在平时练习中注意词汇量的积累；从句使用量稍显不足；行文稍欠流畅，应适当增加连接词的使用。

In present ,online shopping more and more become a popular ways to shopping.Of course ,many people like online shopping .Not only can save their time and money,but also they will enjoy the joys in their deep heart. Online shopping have a positive effect in our life ,at the meanwhile,it also have a negative effect in our life.Online shopping can buy everything whatever we wanted,but at the same time,we can't endure the quality and anything else about the goods.There is a important factor whether we can have a favorable shopping experience. From my point of view,I consider that we need to balance the online shopping and study rational consumption.Only we do that,we can control ourselves.