2011年6月英语四级作文真题:网上购物

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nowadays， more and more people choose to buy in the Internet.As more people think that buying in the Internet is cheap and convince.Its true that you need not to go outdoor to buy cloth and so on,it can be saved the time.The shop in the Internet has varives of things that you can choose even can buy something you cannot buy in you city.But evey coins has their other side,they are so many bad things in the Internet you cannot know before the thing have sent in your hand.Convince can lead us to buy in the shop,but it can lead people do not want to go outdoors.shopping with friends can attach the friendship. As far as I am concerded, you can buy something in Internet ,but you need to go outdoors with friend or family.