2012年12月英语六级作文真题(II):人与电脑

作者句法知识较为扎实，可增加复合句和从句使用；作者词汇表达较丰富，但请仔细检查词汇的拼写；层次不清晰，几乎没有使用衔接词。

With the rapid economic devolopment,the computer gets more closer to people and often connects with people's life ,work and study.This phenomenon arouse hot debate among people. Some people think the computer have an great effect on us,it makes life more convenient by offering large amount information.scientists also explor further field by searching and dealing huge datebase.people widely apply it to astronaut ,militiary, social management and so on .But others think many people are addicted to computer games ,let them spend little timre communicate the people around and gragually far away true life .further more, people may have a poor sight as to sit in front of computer for a long time ,it's bad for both physical and mental. In my opinion,the coin has both sides ,we should make full advantage of it,and avoid the bad effect it could bring , we must make life more brilliant,positive and meaningful.