2012年12月英语六级作文真题(II):人与电脑

文中词汇表达灵活多样，也能较好的使用部分学术词汇；作者句法知识较为扎实，可增加复合句和从句使用；层次不清晰，几乎没有使用衔接词。

With the rapid economic development,the computer gets more closer to people and often connects with people's life,work and study.This phenomenon arouses heated debate among people. Some people think the computer have an great effect on us,it makes life more convenient by offering large amount information.what's more,scientists also explore further field by searching and dealing huge database.people widely apply it to astronaut ,military, social management and so on .But others think many people are addicted to computer games, let them spend little time communicate the people around and gragually far away true life. Further more, people may have a poor sight as to sitting in front of computer for a long time,it's bad for physical and mental. In my opinion,the coin has both sides ,we should make full advantage of it,and avoid the dreadful effect it could bring ,therefore, we must make life more brilliant,positive and meaningful.