2010年12月英语四级作文真题:让孩子独立

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Nowadays,many parents do everything for their children.So that their children cannot do some very simply things.For example,many of them cannot wash their clothes,some of them cannot do the cooking,and some of them even cannot get dressed.But they should not do this.They have to do something to help their children independent.In order to do this,they can let their children do some housework when they at home.If them are not willing to do this,the parents can make promise some money for them.