2012年12月英语六级作文真题(II):人与电脑

拼写做的很棒，学术词汇可适量增加；可适当增加从句的使用；文章结构不够严谨，应增加过程性词汇的使用。

With the rapid economic development,the computer gets more closer to people and often connects with people's life,work and study.This phenomenon arouses heated debate among people. For one thing,some people think the computer have a great effect on us,it makes life more convenient by offering large amount information.what's more,scientists also explore further field by searching and dealing huge database.people widely apply it to astronaut,military, social management and so on .For another thing ,others think many people are addicted to computer games, let them spend little time communicate the people around and gradually far away true life. Further more, people may have a poor sight as to sitting in front of computer for a long time,it's bad for body and mental. In my opinion,the coin has both sides ,we should make full advantage of it,and avoid the dreadful effect it could bring ,therefore, we must make life more brilliant,positive and meaningful.