2012年12月英语六级作文真题(II):人与电脑

文中词汇使用较丰富恰当，但学术词汇表达还需要很大提升；句式变化较为明显，可适当增加从句的使用；衔接成分太少，文章结构欠佳。

With the rapid economic development,the computer gets more closer to people and often connects with people's life,work and study.This phenomenon arouses heated debate among people. Some people think the computer have a great effect on us,it makes life more convenient by offering large amount information.what's more,scientists also explore further field by searching and processing huge database.People widely apply it to astronaut,military, social management and so on .But others think many people are addicted to computer games, let them spend little time communicate the people around and gradually far away real life. Further more, people may have a poor sight as to sitting in front of computer for a long time,it's bad for body and mental. In my opinion,the coin has both sides ,we should make full advantage of it,and avoid the dreadful effect it could bring ,therefore, we must make life more brilliant,positive and meaningful.