2010年12月英语六级作文真题:高校评级

拼写做的很棒，在平时练习中注意词汇量的积累；文中的句子基本没有错误，可适当将文中短句合并为长句；过渡词和衔接词使用不恰当，缺少组织，可适当增加连接词的使用；请提高文章内敛性，段落和句子要围绕主题展开；可以适当增加副词的使用。

My view on University Ranking University ranking is greatly advocated by some people that university ranging is good for the development of education. In addition, some people think that university ranking will mistake students choose school. People who support university ranking think that different universities may be good or bad. University ranking help students choose the better one. Furthermore, A good university can provide a good environment for students. On this issue, others argue that if university rank for different parts, students who study in a low ranking may be feel unfair. At the same time, university ranking may influence company choose his clerk. As far as I am concerned, I think it is necessary for university to rank, it will make university keep pace with other good schools.