作者句法知识很棒,适当增加从句的使用,会取得更不错的成绩;作者在学术词汇方面要多下功夫,有些单词拼错了;衔接成分太少,文章结构欠佳。
with the developing of china economy ,many pepole have realized that great changes have taken place in china.so chinese have neglect the importance of studying chinese when they spend more time in knowing English on recent years. There is a hot debate on this tissue.The most people hold this views that chinese already plays an impotant role in our life.Because it does not matter that what messures nation take but where you are.And the other hold different views.They think we should not go to the old ways that we refuse something that come from other contury.We will fall behind other developed country if we are not study other languages. As far as i am concerned ,we should not go to the extrems .On one hand ,we must study mother tongue well.And the other hand ,we had better learn more foreigner languages for knowing culture around the world .Only in this way can we get a stable position in world.