拼写做的很棒,在平时练习中注意词汇量的积累;可适当增加文中长句和复杂句的使用;缺少组织,上下文衔接稍显不流畅;可以适当增加副词的使用。
University ranking is greatly advocated by some people that university ranging is good for the development of education. In addition, some people think that the ranking of university will mistake students choose a school. People who support the ranking of university think that different universities may be good or bad. University ranking help students choose the better one. Furthermore, A good university can provide a good environment for students. On this issue, others argue that if university rank for different parts, students who study in a low ranking may be feel unfair. At the same time, university ranking may influence company choose his clerk. As far as I am concerned, I think it is necessary for university to rank, and it will make university keep pace with other good schools.
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