2012年12月英语六级作文真题(II):人与电脑

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Computer and Man Nowadays,people have more highly quality life with the developing of technolgy.In the information times,computer become a useful tool which is the most of popular among people. Every family has one computer at least,the child and the old are use it very will.Computer has already became a necessity in people daily life.People go shopping with computer,learning and doing most of the things on the computer.The computer coming,it completely charge the people life.People are more and more rely on the computer，which lead to communicate with others.Some people are addicted to the computer games. In the point of my view,the computer is useful in the information ages.Nevertheless,people should learn to use it correctly.Let the computer be beneficial to people living products.