小学一年级英语作文:Good friend

简单句型过多，从句使用不熟练；文中词汇表达较丰富恰当，学术词汇使用稍显不足；层次欠清晰，衔接成分很少。

I have a very good friend. she is a very smart girl. She's a pupil of primary school. She is my classmate. She has long black hair which is always bound with a red silk ribbon. She likes reading and sports. She is good at playing piano and playing basketball. Expect she always study very hard and she has a warm-heart. She always help everyone when you have any difficult. Every morning, she alway comes to school first and clean the classroom , then preparing something her classmates want or checking something in the classroom. We all love her very much. we are prond of her .