2012年12月英语六级作文真题(II):人与电脑

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With the rapid development of the computer,human seem not to work and live without the Internet any more.Somebody said that" it is not afraid of the computer thinking like human,but afraid of the human think like the computer one day." This is a common thing that we are too reliable the computer to lose our abilities of thinking by ourselves.