题目:Computer and Man人与电脑
字数:150满分:100分
拼写做的很棒,在平时练习中注意词汇量的积累;作者句法不错,但是文章整体句子稍微偏短;衔接成分偏少。
Computer and Man Nowadays,people have more highly quality life with the developing of technology.In the information times,computer becomes a useful tool which is the most of popular among people. Every family has one computer at least,the child and the old are use it very will.Computer has already became a necessity in people daily life.People go shopping with computer,learning and doing most of the things on the internet.With the computer coming,it completely charge people's life.People are more and more rely on the computer,which lead to communicate with others.Some people are addicted to the computer games. In the point of my view,the computer is useful in the information ages.Nevertheless,people should learn to use it correctly.Let the computer be beneficial to people living products.