小学一年级英语作文:Good friend

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hello every one! I am an student ,I'm from china。 I like english and vant studying good wiht english.My favcrte sport is swimming and running.My favcrate vechable is tomato and so on. I love my mather and my father forever.Our school is very beautful an thcel is very nice.thank you !