高一英语作文模拟题:我的家乡

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MY home town now has been changed a lot totally different from what it used to be ,because the environmentally hazardous factors become more and more.I love my home town used to be surrounded by trees.Besides,there were lots of fishs playing in the clean river.What's more ,the housees were very simple and the streets were to narrow to run cars,making the air fresher.Further more,people lived there were very hard and life was not easy.Now ,it has been changed.You can see many big buildings ,factories and shops everywhere.People can earn more mony and life becomes easier. You also can see different cars run on the streets fastly.But the envirenment has been devaststed by the rapid development of industry.You can see lots of trees have been cut down to satisfy the econemic need and numerous fishes have been disappeared because of the dirty water .There is no doubt that,it is very urgent to deal with the pollutants and improve the envirenment to make our life better and healthier.