小学一年级英语作文:Good friend

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My best friend is Suesan who is a 22 years old 's beuatiful girl and she have a long black hair,a piar of big eyes and a red month. .She very like to play with me and tlak fish with me.her voice is better,she is good at singing,she is clever gril ,she likes reading books,she is also nice,she ofter helps us,our classmate like her very much.