高一英语作文模拟题:我的家乡

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MY home town now has been convered a lot totally different from what it used to be ,because the pollution environment become more and more serious.I love my home town used to be surrounded by trees.Besides,there were lots of fishes playing in the clean river.What's more ,the houses were very simple and the streets were too narrow to run cars,making the air fresher.Further more,people lived there were very hard due to life was not easy. Now ,it has been changed.You can see many big buildings ,factories and shops everywhere.People can make more mony and life becomes easier. You also can see different cars run on the streets fastly.But the environment has been devastated by the rapid development of industry.You can see lots of trees have been cut down to satisfy the economic needs and numerous fishes have been disappeared because of the dirty water .There is no doubt that,it is very urgent to deal with the pollutants and improve the envirenment to make our life better and healthier.